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Make Your Direct Mail Sales Letters More Powerful with Personalization

Wednesday, March 5th, 2008

The easiest way to increase your direct mail response rates is to make your packages more personal. Given the choice between reading a flyer and reading a hand-written note from a friend, most people will read the personal note first. Here are some ways to make your direct mail packages more personal. (more…)

Write Your Direct Mail Sales Letters Like a Page on Google to Boost Response, Results and Business

Tuesday, April 3rd, 2007

You can lose a direct mail sale quicker than you think.

So your primary goal at the start of your sales letter is to demonstrate relevance. You must prove, and quickly, that what you have to say is relevant to your reader. That’s why I recommend you write your copy as though it’s appearing on page one of a Google search results page. (more…)

Direct Mail Marketing Agency Copywriter Says “Start at the Start.”

Thursday, September 14th, 2006

Call me a dunce, but I can’t write a single line of copy until I write my opening paragraph. (more…)

Zinger Openings Part 4: Self-deprecation

Thursday, June 23rd, 2005

One enemy you face in every sales letter is pride-resistance. God isn’t the only one who resists the proud. No one likes to listen to (or read) a braggart. (more…)

Zinger Openings Part 3: Quotes

Monday, June 20th, 2005

The first sentence in your sales letter needs to arrest your prospect’s attention. You can do that with a question (see Part 1), with an anecdote (see Part 2) or with a zinger. (more…)

Zinger Openings Part 2: Anecdotes

Monday, June 20th, 2005

One way to get your readers’ attention and to draw them into your letters is to start with an interesting anecdote or story. People like to read about people. (more…)

Zinger Openings Part 1: Questions

Monday, June 20th, 2005

One effective way to start your letter is to ask a provocative question. By provocative, I mean challenging. Your aim is not to enrage your readers, but to provoke them to think. (more…)

Fire your largest cannon first.

Friday, June 17th, 2005

The first time I was shelled by enemy artillery, I learned a vital lesson that applies to the success of your sales letters and fundraising letters. (more…)